A nicely paced chapter. It was very kind (and, of course, logical) that Spock complimented McCoy for his making the vaccine (and if it didn't work, well it was the science and not the man). A small beginning for the triumvirate!
Uhura's "so you and Spock" attempts were smile-worthy. (I loved the last sentence of the previous chapter of she and Bones staring at each other in the night.)
Kirk's "you will go to the bottom of my superior's list" comment to Pike was VERY true to his character.
Awesome cliffhanger. And, one that will take the story into an amazing new direction. Well done.
(If you are ever in the mood for Pinto requests...I'd love to see a story where Mrs. Pine and Mrs. Quinto (the moms) meet for lunch and discuss their boys and their relationship. Mom power.)
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Date: 2009-07-14 01:31 am (UTC)Uhura's "so you and Spock" attempts were smile-worthy. (I loved the last sentence of the previous chapter of she and Bones staring at each other in the night.)
Kirk's "you will go to the bottom of my superior's list" comment to Pike was VERY true to his character.
Awesome cliffhanger. And, one that will take the story into an amazing new direction. Well done.
(If you are ever in the mood for Pinto requests...I'd love to see a story where Mrs. Pine and Mrs. Quinto (the moms) meet for lunch and discuss their boys and their relationship. Mom power.)