Oh, I'm sure it snapped, ducky. Look at the onslaught of people running up and commenting on it, because they all saw that detail, thought 'that might be wrong!' and ran off to the internet, checking multiple websites to make sure before talking about how the writer should have made her minutes slightly lower.

Listen, I review people all the time, it's the point of my entire livejournal, and no one really gets caught on details like that. Especially considering he was bordering on unconscious and he was simply a bit out of his mind by that time. Also, a little thing called 'plot' must happen, so Kirk couldn't have been unconscious or else it would have been a bit tough. For the benefit of the plot, he had to be bordering on unconsciousness instead of unconscious or dead. If I were to seriously review this, I'd have a few things that I definitely got caught on and would bring up, but none of them would be something as tiny and visibly necessary as this. I'd be a little worried that I'd end up looking desperate to present my own sour grapes, or something. I mean, you really went through multiple websites when you found something you thought could possibly maybe be a minor mistake?

Well, anyway, the fic seems to be abandoned. So there's really no point to arguing about any of this.