i'm new to this fic, and i just finished reading through all that you have so far. AMAZING. i can't wait until the next part!
you have the personalities of all the characters down so perfectly. and i like how you show how much jim struggles with his feelings toward spock -- so realistic.
seriously, this must be one of the best kirk/spock fics i've ever read. i'm enjoying it so much! thank you! can't wait to read more! :D