ext_72650 ([identity profile] scoodoo58.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kowaiyoukai 2009-07-15 11:28 am (UTC)



They walked towards the door as Scotty said, "Was that a joke? Because I really would like a raise."

I love that little bit of insecure humor you've brought in to the story. that and i have been watching pegg/frost stuff for like the last week or so and am hanging on to Scotty's every word lately

Kirk's epiphany was perhaps more hilarious to me than it should have been, but then again it is 3:30am and everything is funny right now. I like how it was somehow organic in its origins, but he still surprised himself with it.

I adore how confused Spock is with humans and their behavior. New stuff keeps happening and he is thinking through it in a purely pragmatic sort of process, and truely doesn't understand how all this stuff comes to fruition around him.

PS: I loved that you used the word 'exponentially', because it is perhaps one of my favorite words ever. even if it makes me think of math, which is definately the last thing I would take with me to a deserted island.

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