I really, really enjoy every little moment you include, despite how unrelated it seems to be to the over-arching story in general. I think it just adds so much more to the characters and just... it's such amazing insight. I also love your scenes of just exposition, which address certain aspects or ideas in particular. Those might be my favorite scenes.

And ughh jealous!Spock who doesn't even realize he's jealous... so wonderful!!!!!!! I love this. =) Over 50,000 words makes me a happy, happy trekkie.